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very rough draft about using a phone across..

Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 10:48 pm

by steve-e

I need help getting this to be easier to read, putting right any mistakes, basically it's waffle so far

http://www.steveenglish.com/index.php/441

I rushed the draft so say what you like constructive

Re: very rough draft about using a phone across..

Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 8:21 am

by mum e

Thank you, I,ll borrow yours,

Re: very rough draft about using a phone across..

Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 7:53 pm

by Jo Warriner

Like it!